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• Great poem, only thing i really think is wrong is that if you're reading it the last verse sounds odd with phoenix, but if you could read it aloud dramatically it works perfectly. if you want to, you could change the last verse to something like &q…

  in A new poem, comments and criticisms please? Comment by jacody June 2021
• Great poem, only thing i really think is wrong is that if you're reading it the last verse sounds odd with phoenix, but if you could read it aloud dramatically it works perfectly. if you want to, you could change the last verse to something like &q…

  in A new poem, comments and criticisms please? Comment by jacody June 2021
• Great poem, only thing i really think is wrong is that if you're reading it the last verse sounds odd with phoenix, but if you could read it aloud dramatically it works perfectly. if you want to, you could change the last verse to something like &q…

  in A new poem, comments and criticisms please? Comment by jacody May 2021