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  • I think that it is great- it's got all the emotions going- crying , screaming, wanting to die etc. It sounds kinda Shakespearean Romeo and Juliet-ish. Instead of "Now we are dead" at the end of the poem you should say 'Haha you have to bur…
    in How good is my emo poem? Comment by funkybass4ever June 2021
  • I think that it is great- it's got all the emotions going- crying , screaming, wanting to die etc. It sounds kinda Shakespearean Romeo and Juliet-ish. Instead of "Now we are dead" at the end of the poem you should say 'Haha you have to bur…
    in How good is my emo poem? Comment by funkybass4ever June 2021