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1. Line one, there is a typo on 'mouth,' but I will rest assured that it was an accident...but Line 2 seems a bit incoherent, and since there is no real rhyme scheme you might want to play around with the word placement a bit. I would write it somet…
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1. Line one, there is a typo on 'mouth,' but I will rest assured that it was an accident...but Line 2 seems a bit incoherent, and since there is no real rhyme scheme you might want to play around with the word placement a bit. I would write it somet…
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1. Line one, there is a typo on 'mouth,' but I will rest assured that it was an accident...but Line 2 seems a bit incoherent, and since there is no real rhyme scheme you might want to play around with the word placement a bit. I would write it somet…
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1. Line one, there is a typo on 'mouth,' but I will rest assured that it was an accident...but Line 2 seems a bit incoherent, and since there is no real rhyme scheme you might want to play around with the word placement a bit. I would write it somet…