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  • As a piece of descriptive writing, showing the effects of the weather, it's pretty good. Your English teacher would probably give you an A or a B for it. But as the opening to a story, it doesn't work. You need to start with something that will p…
  • As a piece of descriptive writing, showing the effects of the weather, it's pretty good. Your English teacher would probably give you an A or a B for it. But as the opening to a story, it doesn't work. You need to start with something that will p…
  • One or more of the following... - They value their privacy, though nowadays it's not that hard to figure out who an author really is - you leave too much of a paper trail in a modern society to hide for very long. - They already write under an…
  • One or more of the following... - They value their privacy, though nowadays it's not that hard to figure out who an author really is - you leave too much of a paper trail in a modern society to hide for very long. - They already write under an…
  • One or more of the following... - They value their privacy, though nowadays it's not that hard to figure out who an author really is - you leave too much of a paper trail in a modern society to hide for very long. - They already write under an…
  • One or more of the following... - They value their privacy, though nowadays it's not that hard to figure out who an author really is - you leave too much of a paper trail in a modern society to hide for very long. - They already write under an…