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• It's a nice testimonial and poem. The Christians will love it no doubt. Why don't you post it in the religious and spirituality section or the poetry section.

  in Do you know Him as your Lord? Comment by sal-monella June 2021
• It's not a matter of how you write, it's what you write that counts. There are many ways in which you can convey a story; the trick is can you write it well and keep the reader engaged? You also didn't say whether you write in first or third pers…

  in Writer's, do you prefer past or present tense? Comment by sal-monella June 2021
• So far, so good. Nice writing, better than a lot I've seen here, and so far there is no hint of vampires or werewolves - even better. AND, you write in third person - excellent!

  in How to do you judge a book? The first sentence? Paragraph? Comment by sal-monella June 2021
• So far, so good. Nice writing, better than a lot I've seen here, and so far there is no hint of vampires or werewolves - even better. AND, you write in third person - excellent!

  in How to do you judge a book? The first sentence? Paragraph? Comment by sal-monella June 2021
• So far, so good. Nice writing, better than a lot I've seen here, and so far there is no hint of vampires or werewolves - even better. AND, you write in third person - excellent!

  in How to do you judge a book? The first sentence? Paragraph? Comment by sal-monella May 2021