rockinlibra93
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1. Goes on to much, make it shorter. 2. True, maybe for the dead, but people reach their dreams without heaven. 3. Sounds immatrue. 4. Doesn't sound much like a quote, just an observation. 5. Work on wording and grammar for sure. 6. Interestin…
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1. Goes on to much, make it shorter. 2. True, maybe for the dead, but people reach their dreams without heaven. 3. Sounds immatrue. 4. Doesn't sound much like a quote, just an observation. 5. Work on wording and grammar for sure. 6. Interestin…