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  • it's ok...but I bet you're a teenager who was just dumped...even though you have a lot of imagery in there, it all refers to a single fact, there is no event and no flow of ideas...in a poem you should try to create a little scenario using those ima…
    in A new poem, comments and criticisms please? Comment by priderock21 June 2021
  • it's ok...but I bet you're a teenager who was just dumped...even though you have a lot of imagery in there, it all refers to a single fact, there is no event and no flow of ideas...in a poem you should try to create a little scenario using those ima…
    in A new poem, comments and criticisms please? Comment by priderock21 June 2021
  • it's ok...but I bet you're a teenager who was just dumped...even though you have a lot of imagery in there, it all refers to a single fact, there is no event and no flow of ideas...in a poem you should try to create a little scenario using those ima…
    in A new poem, comments and criticisms please? Comment by priderock21 May 2021