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  • The amount of time spent writing a poem is irrelevant, as you could have been thinking about it for months! This poem could benefit from a Title. Better: "For it's a bit too late - my body's in a civil war" You run out of steam with …
  • The amount of time spent writing a poem is irrelevant, as you could have been thinking about it for months! This poem could benefit from a Title. Better: "For it's a bit too late - my body's in a civil war" You run out of steam with …