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• It's a very interesting story. And the fact that i read the whole thing tells me i really did like it and it captured my attention. Nice work! The theme is great but the sentences and grammar are choppy. Idk if that's just because it's a draft or no…

  in do you like this plot? (mature content)? Comment by nian June 2021
• It's a very interesting story. And the fact that i read the whole thing tells me i really did like it and it captured my attention. Nice work! The theme is great but the sentences and grammar are choppy. Idk if that's just because it's a draft or no…

  in do you like this plot? (mature content)? Comment by nian May 2021