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• It makes sense if you put a comma after choice. I would also recommend you change "you'd" to "you would." If life was a choice, you would be my decision. Great question. Keep writing. Mac McGovern Author

  in Does my Quote Make Sense? Comment by mac-mcgovern June 2021
• It makes sense if you put a comma after choice. I would also recommend you change "you'd" to "you would." If life was a choice, you would be my decision. Great question. Keep writing. Mac McGovern Author

  in Does my Quote Make Sense? Comment by mac-mcgovern May 2021