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  • The first half is REALLY good! Great description of the kissing without too much of the sentimentality bogging it down. You've written that part in such a way that I can put myself in her place and really imagine it. I got a thrill of excitement whi…
    in Is this a good paragraph? Comment by hp-wombat May 2021
  • The first half is REALLY good! Great description of the kissing without too much of the sentimentality bogging it down. You've written that part in such a way that I can put myself in her place and really imagine it. I got a thrill of excitement whi…
    in Is this a good paragraph? Comment by hp-wombat May 2021
  • The first half is REALLY good! Great description of the kissing without too much of the sentimentality bogging it down. You've written that part in such a way that I can put myself in her place and really imagine it. I got a thrill of excitement whi…
    in Is this a good paragraph? Comment by hp-wombat May 2021
  • The first half is REALLY good! Great description of the kissing without too much of the sentimentality bogging it down. You've written that part in such a way that I can put myself in her place and really imagine it. I got a thrill of excitement whi…
    in Is this a good paragraph? Comment by hp-wombat May 2021