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• 'Show, don't tell' means 'don't put in big long descriptive parts'. So, for example, to 'show, not tell' that someone had a bad temper: WRONG: Jackson had been in a foul temper all day, even shouting at the postman for knocking on the door. RI…

  in how to describe a prison camp? Comment by happiness-starship June 2021
• 'Show, don't tell' means 'don't put in big long descriptive parts'. So, for example, to 'show, not tell' that someone had a bad temper: WRONG: Jackson had been in a foul temper all day, even shouting at the postman for knocking on the door. RI…

  in how to describe a prison camp? Comment by happiness-starship June 2021
• 'Show, don't tell' means 'don't put in big long descriptive parts'. So, for example, to 'show, not tell' that someone had a bad temper: WRONG: Jackson had been in a foul temper all day, even shouting at the postman for knocking on the door. RI…

  in how to describe a prison camp? Comment by happiness-starship May 2021