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• The only part that tripped me up was: "and you can't be feell envy rise like a tsunami like a bird" Those first two lines could actually go together, even though they're not supposed to. "Feell" should be "feel." …

  in Does this poem make you think? Comment by englishrox June 2021
• The only part that tripped me up was: "and you can't be feell envy rise like a tsunami like a bird" Those first two lines could actually go together, even though they're not supposed to. "Feell" should be "feel." …

  in Does this poem make you think? Comment by englishrox May 2021
• The only part that tripped me up was: "and you can't be feell envy rise like a tsunami like a bird" Those first two lines could actually go together, even though they're not supposed to. "Feell" should be "feel." …

  in Does this poem make you think? Comment by englishrox May 2021