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It depends on your age and grade. I'll tell you have the right idea :) but you're paragraph is pretty sloppy with weak sentence to sentence transition. Not a very good persuasive essay. Also "Our country" not "Our World"…
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It depends on your age and grade. I'll tell you have the right idea :) but you're paragraph is pretty sloppy with weak sentence to sentence transition. Not a very good persuasive essay. Also "Our country" not "Our World"…