My poem ?? constructive answer?
" in a girls mind" inspired by a friend not necassirly s love poem
I'm trapped under ur gravity
Forever I've been here so long
I want to leave
Yet I hold on
Hi I say
The room is fills gray
The kind only your mind can see, because of you and me
I hold on to the pain memories and fear of being imperfect
Why do I do this
I do it for love
But everything seems to come above
Me
I laughed and cried ... I looked into blue skies wondering why I'm less than good for you
Pain is hard deep pain is tough
But our communication is rough
You hurt me badly and left me ever so sadly but yet I keep comin through for you
Tears are shed but dont fret I'll pretend everything is fine
Why won't. You say hi
I'll build a brick wall outside and paste a smile on it ... But on the inside
I'll cry and think why...
And you wonder what goes on In a girls mind
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did not enjoy it all that much