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Money in my life.
Money is very importante in my life. But, I don't have much money. So, I try to save up and spend little money. I spend my cash with food, clothes and shoes. But, I would like very much spend money with my college, trips and shop a lot of things. I intend to work for have more money in my life.
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Money in my life.
Money is very important in my life. But, I don't have much money. So, I try to save and only spend a little. I spend my cash on food, clothes and shoes. But, I would like to spend my money on my college, on trips and on things I want. I intend to work hard just to get more money to use.
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importance of money in my life.
Money is very important in my life. But I do not have much money. So I try to save and spend little. I spend my money on food, clothes and shoes. But I like to spend my money paying for my college, making travel and shopping. I intend to work to have more money in my life.