Read my poem, please?
Feel free to criticize, compliment, or anything as needed.
Slowly drifting off
into a perfect world
the only place that I can pour
my feelings onto a page
a place that I can go on a rage
all I need is a pencil and paper
then thoughts start to flow
it's poetry
a simple escape from reality
a way to become understood
in a little fantasy world
Comments
This sounded very familiar. Have you posted this before? Anyway, nice piece.
Wonderful.If you are a minor,and your mom lets you,read poems by William Carlos Wiliams
Shockingly simple. Yet us poets can relate so well to the words.
if you are a new writer , you did the best. because it looks like a poem of a regular writer.
best of luck.
mail me if you can write another.
Its really good!! Its flows together very nicefully and makes me feel good.
This is really good! i think it captures the feeling/moment well, good work
Amazing I love it!