Death. . A poem. 10 Free Pts.!?
*I love writing dark poetry. It is my favorite kind of poetry. 
I hope you enjoy this!*
*Death. . .*
Coming to my door
leaving me with fright
death is always here
lingering through the night.
A dark black veil
covers me in my dreams
trapped abandoned and lost
filing me with screams.
Rain is pouring down
the cold is rushing in
it's fingers wrap around me
I am close to an end.
It kisses my skin
crawls with delight
I am losing hope
death is winning the fight.
I close my eyes
as death takes over
smiling and laughing
completely ready and sober.
My light blows out
as darkness creeps in
I now lost the fight
and now death is my friend.
Jasmine(Me).
Comments
Dude. That poem kicks ***. Super cool. Love it
I think it's a great poem! Only thing is, the whole somber mood is kind of spoiled a bit in the third line of the fifth stanza. Other than that, I love it!
HI like the first 16 lines, very much.
I very much like that you love what you are doing and love writing. Hold onto it. No matter where you find yourself in this life - you will have your ability to write. As one of my good friends used to say - "Write On!".
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wow your really good at writing.