Grammar problem?
okay so i have an essay due tomorrow. i'm editing the essay now im not sure if this is correct-
the play goes on to show the war between Antony and Octavius and the conspirators.
so antony and octavius are on the same side. and the conspirators are on a different side. i feel like they express not the right thing. i dont think there should be Antony, Octavius and the conspirators. that doesnt sound right either. what should i do?
Comments
Use "their conspirators" rather than "the conspirators".