It's actually spelled grammar, with an ar ending. Try this, "As the story continued, small pieces of luminous information were revealed," I changed slow to small because if you wanted to say slow it would be, "As the story continued, pieces of luminous information were slowly revealed,"
It doesn't quite make sense, because you talk about slow pieces of luminous information.
Luminous refers to light, and there's no such thing as 'slow pieces' I don't know if you want to call the information luminous or not - you probably mean illuminating, which means information that casts a light on something, or clarifies it. It's slightly illuminating has a slightly different meaning then luminous.
You would probably make better sense saying it this way:
As the story continued, pieces of illuminating information were slowly revealed.
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It's actually spelled grammar, with an ar ending. Try this, "As the story continued, small pieces of luminous information were revealed," I changed slow to small because if you wanted to say slow it would be, "As the story continued, pieces of luminous information were slowly revealed,"
It doesn't quite make sense, because you talk about slow pieces of luminous information.
Luminous refers to light, and there's no such thing as 'slow pieces' I don't know if you want to call the information luminous or not - you probably mean illuminating, which means information that casts a light on something, or clarifies it. It's slightly illuminating has a slightly different meaning then luminous.
You would probably make better sense saying it this way:
As the story continued, pieces of illuminating information were slowly revealed.
It would be "as the story continued, pieces of luminous information were slowly revealed"