Is this a poem?
There are lots of words in this world
But this feeling can't describe a word
Music heard in my heart
Melodies can be an art
Time is running and never stop
Like I felt that can't be stop
Days that never end,
Goodbyes don't want the end
Everytime your very near
Strange feeling is something rare
Now I know you've got one thing
Can't believe your my everything
Too late to tell this way
Our hearts have different way..
Please need help
Comments
It is true that it is a poem, just not a good poem. It is way short on angst.
Would you consider spending a year attending a university in the United States? If so, talk to your local chapter of Kiwanis International about their International Student Exchange Program. It takes about a year to set it up. I recommend Oregon State University as the sponsoring school because it has such a large international student population.
it is a poem because it doesn't have to rhyme and it sounds like a really nice one and you have a lot of feelings in it which makes it a good poem.