Poem ideas please... help?
I love this girl and wrote her a poem on a bit of paper that I extracted from a baby deers hoof. It went along the lines ' I love you with all my heart, I love you so much you make me want to fart'. She threw it back at me, and gouged my face. Any suggestions for a romantic poem please ?
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Your grasp of loving verse is good, congratulations for that! You should continue in that vein!!
But the choice of material on which to write has to be questioned. Have you tried Basildon Bond A3 in leather grain? Its very fashionable now, I think that she might appreciate it.
Good Luck. I see the Yanks are online!!
Ive gotten love notes like that before , and i didnt react like that !!! I laughed so hard i nearly peed my pants !!! If you really like this girl , go to the library and on the internet for some good hints and tips !! Im a songwriter , so just create your own stuff !!! If that girl rejects your other peom , then shes a cow !! If i got a note like that , i would go out with the guy !!! lol !! I think shes probably just a cow , so , i would just move on buddy !!
Yeah, stop writing poems that have to do with any bodily functions like farting or burping.
Maybe find some really famous love poem from online and read her that.
Hmm...interesting way to show you care. If you wanna find good love poems just pick a nice country song and copy it..she'll get the hint. Something like Steve Holy's Good Morning Beautiful.
first of all never use bodily functions in a love poem. words like fart, dont exactly make a woman swoon. and second of all dont tell her you love her right off the bat, that will scare her a way. if she has blue eyes, write her something like, your eyes are like little pool of satfires, you lips are as red as the berries that grow in the wild, you know, something beautiful and romantic. let her know how you feel, without telling her you love her right off the bat
Did you honestly think that was romantic?! Just think about how she makes you feel and write. Use a rhyming dictionary online if you want. Have fun. The words should just flow once you get into that "zone". I would write one...but it should be written by you not someone on yahoo. Good luck!
I'm sorry I have trouble expressing what I want to say...
It's just that I think about you everyday.
When I see you I feel tongue-tied
My thoughts and actions don't coincide
I want to let you know what I feel
I think you're BeauTiFuL, that's what's real
Lately I've been feeling in a daze
I know what it is... it's my craze
I think I'm crazy over you...
I think I'm in love with you.
the man I am,
the woman you are,
Two separate places.
A word or a phrase,
takes the miles away.
There is something intriguing,
just under the skin,
that makes us keep going,
searching for more,
of what attracts us both,
to what we don't want to stop........
roses are red
horses eat hay
my poems are lousy
but in bed im okay
I'm sorry for what I wrote, so jam the 1st one down your throat...