Depressing poems!?
people say i am reallyyyyy good at writing peoms
and usually i just tend to write depressing peoms i don't know why
and i am not even depressed sometimes its weird
maybe i think its the inside me that is dark and is afraid to come out because ppl won't like the sad me since im usually hyper
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Hey that is exactly how I feel i am always the happy one always the hyper super active one. and i really dont have anything to be depressed of so maybe its inside me and doesnt want to be ridiculed. well heres my poem
I cry
I feel pain
I want to die
I am a daughter hiding my depression
I am a sister making a good impression
I have a hand full of pain, and a head full of stress
I have a heart full of anger hidden in my chest.
Evil or good
Demon or Angel
Death or Life
This is the battle
Going on in my soul
What will win Black or White?
I can remember the first time I cried
And how I wiped my tears , and buried the pain inside.
My anger grows inside of me
I cannot contain it for much longer
What is happening to me?
Why do I feel this?
As I slip into the darkness
It is getting harder for me to come into the light.
I am growing very fond of the darkness now
The light is becoming a stranger to me.
Why? Why do I feel this?
I am always feeling anger or sadness now
It is very rare for me to be truly happy
But I keep going I put a smile on my face,
hide my emotions and get on with life.
But that is something that I fear I cannot do for much longer
I am sick of Crying
Tired of Trying
Yes I am Smiling
Inside I am Dying
. This sounds like a cry for attention, or help. I'm sensing some MAJOR insecurities. I seriously doubt that a person can be a "reallyyyyy good" poet if they don't truly feel or haven't ever experienced what they're "expressing themselves" about.
Depression is a serious state that, in some cases can lead to destruction of the mind or even suicide. One might argue "Who are you to write about depression when you've just admitted that you're not depressed?" I must say, I would second that arguement. YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT DEPRESSION IS.
I write poems to express my feelings and show the world my point of view. Lets say if I write a poem about how the Earth looks,it would be different from anybody else's,because it shows my uniqueness. That's what I truely think poems are all about,your vision of things. So just be yourself and if you want to show them you can! But don't let sarcasm or critisism get to you.
okay whats the question and here's my poem
i dream of Ur touch while Ur away i dream of Ur smile all though the day i remember the day u came into my life i dream of the day ill b Ur wife i dream of the day i can fall asleep next to u i dream of the day i say i do to b Ur wife together 4 life is a dream i have every night
john i will always love u happy anniversary
love u
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i do that too, but i AM depressed.
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It's probably a cry for attention.