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My last vocation was really wonderful. I traveled to Rio de Janeiro for six days to see an old friend off my dad, swim at the beach and know the bread of sugar.
In the house of a friend of my dad, we talked about the beaches of Rio de Janeiro and we laughed a lot! He’s very funny!
We went to Copacabana beach. The beach was with many people! There, I swam, ate, laughed a lot and talked with my parents.
I visited the Christ too! It’s wonderful! Very, very beautiful .
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My last vacation was really wonderful. I travelled to Rio de Janeiro for six days to see an old friend of my dad's, swim at the beach, and visit the Sugar Loaf.
At my dad's friend's house, we talked about the beaches of Rio de Janeiro and we laughed a lot! He’s very funny!
We went to Copacabana beach. The beach was crowded! While there, I swam, ate, laughed a lot and talked with my parents.
I visited Christ the Redeemer too! It’s wonderful! Very, very beautiful.
My last VACATION was really wonderful. I traveled to Rio de Janeiro for six days to see an old friend OF my dad, swim at the beach and TO VISIT the SUGAR LOAF MOUNTAIN.
AT MY DAD'S FRIEND'S HOME we talked about the beaches of Rio de Janeiro and we laughed a lot! He's very funny!
We ALSO went to Copacabana beach. The beach WAS CROWDED with many people. There I swam, ate, laughed a lot and talked with my parents.
I ALSO VISITED the STATUE of CHRIST THE REDEEMER. It is wonderful! Very, very beautiful!
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Espero ter ajudado.
My last vacation was really wonderfull. i traveled to rio de janeiro for six days to visit an old friend off my dad. I swim at the beach and it's very funny.
In the house of the friend of my dad, we talked about the beaches of Rio de Janeiro and we laughed a lot! He's very funny!
We went to Copacabana beach. The beach was with many people!There,I swam, ate, laughed a lot and talked with my parents.
I visited the Cristo too!It's wonderfull! Very,very beutuful.
Minha prof estava online agora no msn,dai passei o texto pra ela,ela fez umas correçoes e achou muito bom,parabens pela escrita!