Is this a good first paragraph so far?
It for my first thesis that roman inventions made day to day life easier
Roman inventions made their day to day life easier. Inventions made it easier for the Romans to get water without walking miles. People who were traveling had a easier time getting to their destination because they had a clear route to get there and it was faster.
Update:also what needs to be fix let me know not just say its bad
Update 3:i have this now Roman inventions made the roman people day to day life easier. Aqueducts made it easier for the Romans to get water without walking miles and promoted sanitation. Socks added comfort to people's feet and kept there knees warm when autumn came around and it started to get cold. The road and highway system made traveling easier because they had a clear rout with milestones so they know where they were and they could get to where they needed to faster.Bridges made it so an area of water could be crossed without getting wet or without having to swim.
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It is generally a good start but has much potential to become better.... :)you definitely have all the facts ...its just the way in putting them together...trust me...its perhaps the hardest part for every writer(presenting their thoughts in an interesting way)but you are off to a great start!
Something can always be added..as a great mind once said
Roman inventions made their day to day life easier."
excellent thesis and then you want on to prove it
Google " Roman Inventions"
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