do these sentences make sentences make sense?
Arthur was not bodily to the people of the neighborhood because he was never seen.
was this before: Arthur was not real to the people of the neighborhood because he was never seen.
The ‘mockingbirds’ in this novel are the characters who were uncensurable and did not deserve their fate.
was this before: The ‘mockingbirds’ in this novel are the characters who were innocent and did not deserve their fate.
Tom Robinson is a prime example of a mockingbird in this story because he was an innocent man who was tried and then killed for no reason.
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The "befores" are fine, the "afters" make no sense at all.
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