How to oraganize these sentences into paragraphs?
I want to keep most of the sentences seperate complete sentences but i do not know how to make them into a paragraph without making it sound weird.
The woman in the photo is named Jolie.
she has brown hair.
she is short
her guitarra is pink
she has pretty hair
she has a big guitarra
she has brown eyes
she has pretty eyes
she is young
she has a pretty guitarra
she has pretty red lips
she has a pretty smile
she has a grey shirt
she has a pretty shirt
I have made several attempts at making these sentences into paragraphs.
Any help
thank you so much !!
Muy, muy!! you may add very and a lot ,etc;
Comments
You will never make a good readable paragraph if you insist on keeping these as 'seperate complete sentences.'
extremely tough step. browse on google and yahoo. that will can assist!