Does my Quote Make Sense?

If life was a choice you'd be my decision.

Update:

If it doesn't and you understand what I mean, help?

Comments

  • It makes sense if you put a comma after choice. I would also recommend you change "you'd" to "you would."

    If life was a choice, you would be my decision.

    Great question. Keep writing.

    Mac McGovern

    Author

  • It certainly does make a lot of sense, it is a great quote (well done ;-) your a natural

  • Yes it does

    I think its meaning like, if i could choose life you would be the reason for choosing it, correct?

  • Is that a pick up line?

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