how is this poem so far?
The fire ignites
It is the warmth and security
Of love and compassion so tender,
The fuel is the initial spark
The one that started it all
The only thing I find serenity in,
i need one more stanza can someone help me??
i had to use an extended metaphor to write about love and i chose fire.
how is it so far??
Comments
So far so good. I would like to suggest you to complete the third stanza yourself, so that you can give the exact flow to the reader.
Good Luck