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Dear Natalia,
It was nice to talk with you by phone.
My name is Sam and we are a gas appliance manufacturer in China with 13 years experience. We specialized in Gas hob and Gas water heater. We noticed that your brand is very strong in Ukrainian market and we are seeking to work with you on gas hobs. (we aim to sell our gas hobs to this customer)
For Gas hobs, we have kept good cooperation with top brands like A and B, In Ukrainian market, we cooperate with C company. We also work with D, E and F company for Gas water heater in Russian market.
To get advantage on market, we cooperated with our customers to develop new features and technology, At the moment we are trying to apply different colors to stainless steel hobs.
Would you please share your strategy on gas hobs? Let me know any initiative for 2014 and we will check how we could support you.
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Dear Natalia,
It was nice to talk with you on the phone.
My name is Sam and we are a gas appliance manufacturer in China with 13 years experience. We specialize in gas hobs and gas water heaters. We noticed that your brand is very strong in the Ukrainian market and we are seeking to work with you on gas hobs. (We aim to sell our gas hobs in this market.)
For gas hobs, we cooperate with top brands like A and B, In the Ukrainian market, we cooperate with C company. We also work with D, E and F company for gas water heaters in the Russian market.
To get an advantage in the market, we have worked together with our customers to develop new features and technology, At the moment we are trying to apply different colors to stainless steel hobs.
Would you please share your strategy on gas hobs? Let me know any initiative for 2014 and we will check how we could support you.