Proof read my paragraph, please?
Ok so here is what the assignment is, I need to turn in a description paragraph topic of my choice(I chose football)
Here it is: Foot ball is a well know sport in the united state of America, liked by many men, women, and children. It involves a lot of team work and speed. There are a few ways to make point although the main way is touchdown. One way to block a touchdown is tackling the opponent with the ball. In tackle foot ball any players would normal ware pads to protect them from possible broken bones, or other possible injures. That is a brief description of football, a very well know sport in the United States of America today.
Is there any problems?
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I found plenty. Copy my text and go through it bit by bit. There was a mixture of spelling, grammar and punctuation errors.
Football is a well known sport in the United States of America liked by many men, women, and children. It involves a lot of teamwork and speed. There are a few ways to make points although the main way is touchdown. One way to block a touchdown is by tackling the opponent with the ball. In tackle football, players would normally wear pads to protect them from possible broken bones or other possible injures. That is a brief description of football, a very well known sport in the United States of America today.
Football is a well known sport in the United States of America. It is liked by many men, women and children. It involves a lot of teamwork and speed. There are a few ways to gain points although the main way is a touchdown. One way to block a touchdown is tackling the opponent with the ball. In tackle football, players would normally wear pads to protect them from broken bones, or other injuries. That is a breif description of Football, a very well known sport in the USA.
State's, and that's all
well done x