Reword paragraph? Help!?
Fitting in to your current school doesn’t always mean having the best grades or running the fastest mile time. It doesn’t mean wearing the nicest clothes or having the most friends, or even the dress size you wear. Ignore what other people tell you about that stuff. Ignore their attempts to control what you wear, or who you hang out with, or what you spend time doing on your weekends.
I need to make this sound really good, thanks in advance!
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It does sound really good.
Just change 'in to' into 'into'.
''Fitting into your current ...''