describe a scary room?

Hi can anyone help

I need to write a very good description of a scary room for english literature

My ideas are based around the Red Room from Jane Eyre

The room is in an empty orphanage, any ideas?

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  • As I stood, gazing at the dilapidated house. I shivered, as though, ice had replaced my spine. The cold air enveloped the entire body. The multiple layer of clothing could not protect against the deathly cold. The walkway leading up to house were cracked. Weeds and dandelions poked out from these cracks. Red roses grown wildly in thick batches by the gate. The moonlight cast a ghoulish glow on the house. Vines formed a twisted maze upon the side of house, reaching their tentacles towards the roof. The house's walls showed black decay by neglect. Splotches of original paint hinted at the house former prosperity. Cobwebs covered the corners of the doors, tiny black spiders threading towards their prey. The house is fit for the kings and queens of the supernatural.

    The door begrudgingly creaked open. A musty, dank order creep into my nose. The house was dead silence except for the intermittent creaks and moans. Black and brown mold dotted the ceiling in clusters, evident of rain seeping through the roof. I quietly entered the dark living room. Windows covered with grime and dirt, the calm moonlight struggled to penetrate the darkness in thin thread rays. Sharp shadows roamed around the room. The sofa and chairs overturned revealing deep grooves on the ground where they used to sit. Wallpaper lay curled on the floor. A large jagged hole dug through the wall stood as though daring any to enter. Picture frames hanged off-centered. Sharp shadows roamed around the room. A misplaced grand bookcase stood the corner of the room, undisturbed for a long time. Selecting the correct book could reveal a secret doorway into a labyrinth.

  • A room without doorways, no residing house windows, and the ceiling won't be in a position of be seen. somewhat no longer a room yet it rather is white. each little thing is white. there is not any longer something, no longer something yet white, white and greater white. it rather is too bright. i'm all on my own in that room, which isn't a room. Shudder. i might bypass loopy, no longer scared, loopy! This sounds only like yet another answer yet I swear i've got no longer copied. it is what I come across as my only suited concern. you additionally can interpret it as "fearful of dying".

  • howling wind, windows not closed properly, flickering light bulb

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