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• I understand what you're saying here, however you need to write to your intended audience. IF you are writing for any reason other than your audience, then you might be losing your focus on WHY you are writing. Maybe you can expand on WHY Holden Ca…

  in Does this intro paragraph make sense? Comment by dusko-popov June 2021
• I understand what you're saying here, however you need to write to your intended audience. IF you are writing for any reason other than your audience, then you might be losing your focus on WHY you are writing. Maybe you can expand on WHY Holden Ca…

  in Does this intro paragraph make sense? Comment by dusko-popov June 2021