what can i do to conclude my paragraph?

reabyreaby
in Education & Reference

im writing a paragraph for english...its about what happened over the summer...i need a concluding sentence

"i'm writin about what happened over my summer. i didn't have any fun and was really bored. the only thing i really did was go to texas. while in texas, i went to seaworld, but that wasn't fun either. my whole summer was really bad but i'd still rather sleep all day and do nothing all day than go back to school."

Comments

  • huhhuh

    Surely you did something fun. I didn't even travel 100 miles from home this summer. Sounds like you had more fun than me.

    Sleeping all day doesn't sound fun, it sounds easy.

    If this is what you really want to say, you can end it by saying, "at least I didn't spend the summer in a hospital, or in jail".

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