Poem Part 2...?
Upgraded Poem..
How do I breathe.....
It feels so different being here,
I was so used to be next to you,
Life for me is not the same,
There's no one to turn to.
I don't know why I let it go too far,
Starting over - it's so hard.
Seems like everywhere I try to go,
I keep thinking of you.
I just had a wake up call,
Wishing that I never let you fall,
Baby you are not to blame at all
Girl I'm losing' my mind.
Yes I made a mistake.
I thought that you would be mine.
Guess the joke was on me.
I miss you so bad, I can't sleep.
I wish I knew where you could be.
Another dude is replacing me,
But this can't be happening.
I can't get over you no..
Baby I don't wanna let go.
How do I breathe...
Comments
It's good but the modern language in it makes it almost un-romantic.
For example "another dude is replacing me" would be best changed.