15 Pieces Poem so far please answer ASAP?

tabbietabbie
in Arts & Humanities

Friendship, To drift apart,

War, To save a country,

Scars, To never heal,

Divorce, To free Yourself,

Love, To find the one,

Hate, To never forgive,

Loneliness, To have Nobody,

The Line Not To Cross

Wadaya think? Its not done yet obviously there isn't 15 Pieces haha. Answer Asap

Update:

Its not hard to answer. Whats stopping You?

Comments

  • aiden-moore_60c117a0f270faiden-moore_60c117a0f270f

    I like the concept, but I'm not sure what you are trying to say, the first two lines seem to be ironic, but the rest seem to be definitions. Other than that it's pretty good, I would suggest beginning the next few lines with Life, Death, Time, Happiness, and Pain, since they are classic poetic themes. Good luck.

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