You omit information that is important. Primarily, how long is the speech to be?
Not knowing that I will suggest you start with this minimal information:
Your name, age, future plans, such as what college you would like to attend and what you plan to study.
If you have more time, you can include things about your family. How many brothers, sisters you have, etc. You can share your hobbies and what you do for fun.
If you have more time, you can include accomplishments, etc. until you have enough to fill up the time. Don't forget to make yourself interesting!
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You omit information that is important. Primarily, how long is the speech to be?
Not knowing that I will suggest you start with this minimal information:
Your name, age, future plans, such as what college you would like to attend and what you plan to study.
If you have more time, you can include things about your family. How many brothers, sisters you have, etc. You can share your hobbies and what you do for fun.
If you have more time, you can include accomplishments, etc. until you have enough to fill up the time. Don't forget to make yourself interesting!