A new poem called To parents, critique?
A child is not a book; a child is not a toy
But he is your child, part of you
You reflection on earth, but you never see
The soul. Only smiling at your reflection.
Happy at yourself, proud of your achievement
You gave birth, you bought the world
You read the books, watched the videos
Sacrificed your sleep, cursed at the screaming
Baby, building for a future, building for a tomorrow
Forgetting to see the child.
Tomorrow has arrived, you child has grown
You still smile, never hearing the pain
Never seeing the struggle, never talking
To the child as life swallows him
Unsure of his next step, taking the punches
Searching for the right thing, while
You smile, proud of your achievement.
You gave birth to a human,
But you created a monster
You gave birth to a human
But you were never the parent
You gave birth to a human
But you never saw the human
Only seeing yourself
Adoring your perfection
As it cracked
Day and night.
So you parent
You want peace on earth
Start with your child
Your want better future
See your child
You want better humanity
Talk to your child
Listen to your child
And be the parent
Not the actor.
Comments
i think thats a good poem, maybe you should get it published