a paragraph about 9/11? help please?
So this is what i have, and id really want to have at lease 3 more sentences. All i need is what happened that day and why did it happen i mean why did they do it? im so frustrated thanks soo much in advance
On September 11, 2001, a group of Muslim extremist shocked the world when they carried out a series of plane bombings that crashed into important American federal buildings, killing thousands of innocent passengers. Terrorist had crashed into The World Trade Center and the Pentagon creating a very unsafe feeling for many American citizens. Osama bin Ladin and the al-Qaida group were the most serious threat the country faced.
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You might want to mention that this was a total surprise. Nobody in the intelligence community had any idea that the 9/11 attack was in the planning stages. Nobody even knew that the jets were headed toward the World Trade Center until the last few seconds before they crashed.
On September 11, 2001, a group of RADICAL Muslim extremist shocked the world when they ATTACKED AMERICA BY CARRYING out a series of plane bombings AND killing thousands of innocent CITIZENS.
Terrorist crashed FULLY LADEN CIVILIAN AIRLINE PLANES into the 2 World Trade CENTRE TOWERS and the Pentagon, creating FEAR AND PANIC AND a very VULNERABLE feeling for many American citizens. Osama bin Ladin and the TERRORIST GROUP al-Qaida, WHO PLANNED AND FINANCED THE ATTACK, were the most serious threat the country HAD EVER faced.
THE REASONS BEHIND THE ATROCITY WERE PARTLY IN RETALIATION FOR AMERICA'S FOREIGN POLICY IN THE MIDDLE EAST AND ITS SUPPORT OF ISRAEL ALONG WITH THEIR BASIC HATRED OF WESTERN INFLUENCE IN 'THEIR' PART OF THE WORLD. BIN LADIN EVEN STATED, '....we are striking them because of their evil and injustice in the whole of the Islamic World, especially in Iraq and Palestine and their occupation of the Land of the Two Holy Sanctuaries.'
* Hope this is of some help.
Sorry about the 'shouting', it's just to show my words added or changed.
Best thing is to do some more research. There are many differing views on what happened and how it was handled. Conspiracy theories abound. However, just because people called them conspiracy theories did not mean they did not have truth to them. All that part is really muddled about what happened with security.
Check out this website:http://911digitalarchive.org/
It is a site that collects people's recollections of the incident. It is a third-hand source, but it gives you an idea where to go to get more facts. Getting people's stories is the best way to piece together what happened and why. This is an incident that has as much impact and controversy that President John F. Kennedy's assassination had, and the details of both incidents are at least partially lost in mystery.
Some of the personal accounts can help you with your article.
i could say shop as Patriot day and not national holiday. If human beings are at artwork, then like ninety 9% of all companies, college and establishments could desire to have a 2nd or 2 of silence for remembrance. this form the international would not overlook. If its a holiday, human beings are at domicile and busy etc, so it somewhat is not getting the assertion it merits. (i'm British BTW)
You'll need to rewrite this. Let me give you the rest of the story and then you condense it into a paragraph: Please watch this first video linked here. It’s only one minute. You’re going to be impressed. This is a local news video of a witness named Kenny Johannemann testifying to explosions that happened in the basement of one of the WTC towers. While he is testifying you still see both of the twin towers burning behind him in the background. This was live footage and it's only ONE minute long. Go ahead and watch this here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yEuzU3LMgCA
(YouTube Key Words: Johannemann suicide)
Those explosions were from charges that were set up to weaken the structure preparatory to pulling the tower. You didn’t see this on TV. Does that prick your interest?
Now look at this. Barry Jennings was another witness that got stuck in Building Seven during 9/11. Building Seven fell later that same day but was NEVER hit by a jet. Watch his account here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PbbZE7c3a8Q
(YouTube Key Words: Barry Jennings dead age – more hits when “dead age” excluded)
Again, the explosions he talked about were from charges that were set up to weaken the structure preparatory to pulling down this building. Again, you didn't see Barry’s testimony on TV.
Here’s some different evidence. Steve Jones, a nuclear physicist, obtained WTC dust samples from the collapsed WTC towers and analyzed it. He reported his detailed findings here in Boston:
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=1957490867...
(Google Video Key Words: Steve Jones Boston)
Those “red chips” he talked about weren’t the smoking gun they were THE GUN. See the article here:
http://www.prisonplanet.com/scientists-find-active...
Click here for his actual peer-reviewed paper::
http://www.bentham.org/open/tocpj/articles/V002/7T...
Now get a load of this:
The BBC reported the collapse of the Solomon Building (Building Seven) 20 minutes BEFORE it actually collapsed. Watch that here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JlL6ewlW6oc
(YouTube Key Words: BBC Solomon slips – you get more hits by excluding “slips”)
How did the BBC know in advance that Building Seven would collapse? The fact that it was announced in advance is strong support that the flow of information on this tragedy was being controlled.
Were the people at the BBC the only people privy to this information? Probably not. Larry Silverstein was the leaseholder of Building Seven. In a 2002 PBS documentary he talked about how he discussed the Building Seven situation with the fire department and how the decision was made by that department to "pull" it. Well, there is one problem with his testimony that you may want to consider. It takes about a week to rig a building with explosives before you pull it. So are buildings constructed with built-in explosives just in case they need to be blown up in a hurry? Building Seven went down that same day. Whoops! Watch Larry's testimony from the PBS documentary here in this short clip:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C3E-26oVIIs
(YouTube Key words: PBS Silverstein)
Incidentally, luckily for Larry, he insured his property in the nick of time just six months before September 11th! It was a sweet deal. So who orchestrated this terrorist event anyway? They had to get past the FBI and CIA and prepare at least three buildings for demolition as well as direct the activities of men with box cutters (if they even existed). It’s clear from the evidence presented here so far that at least some of the media was in on this. What else could explain the BBC blunder? They had to control the information to those of us who might not like the idea that a few thousand people had to be killed in order to fulfill some kind of agenda. What’s in it for these people that were “in the know?”
Aaron Russo was a famous movie producer who became best friends with one of the Rockefeller family members (Remember “The Rose” and "Trading Places" starring Eddie Murphy?). This is the same Rockefeller family that is a large shareholder of the Federal Reserve Bank -- a private company that loans money to our government and contributes to our huge national debt. You see the name “Federal Reserve” at the top the dollar bill. Yes, we're talking about THAT Bank! Anyway, the upshot of this friendship was that in the year 2000 (11 months before 9/11) Aaron Russo learned from his Rockefeller buddy that there was going to be an "event". He was told that out of this event the U.S. would go into Afghanistan and look for Bin Laden in Caves and then the U.S. would go into Iraq. His fascinating testimony about this "event" starts at 26:45 here in this interview:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YGAaPjqdbgQ
(Google Video Key Words: Aaron Russo Warnings)