Do these sentences make sense?

1. She goes up to this man with looking straight into his eyes.

2. I love sitting down at the end of a long day and reading a good book.

3. I love to sit down at the end of a long day and reading a good book.

4. People are preferring to use recycled paper products.

5. People are preferring using recycled paper products.

6. He prefers to stay firmly in the background.

7. He prefers staying firmly in the background.

8. He doesn't like publicity.

9. He doesn't like to be publicity.

10. He doesn't like to get publicity.

Comments

  • 1. She goes up to this man WHILE looking straight into his DARK BROWN eyes.***(Add detail)

    If #1 is to be past-tense, make sure you change goes to WENT.

    2. I love NOTHING MORE sitting down at the end of a long HARD day and reading a good book.

    3. I love to sit down at the end of a long day and reading a good book. ***GET RID OF THIS ONE

    4. People ARE INCLINED to use recycled paper products . (change a little)

    For more detail,

    5. THESE DAYS, people PREFER using recycled paper products.

    6. He prefers to stay firmly in the background.******MAYBE change firmly to securely or steadfast

    7. He prefers staying firmly in the background.****************GET RID OF THIS ONE

    8. He doesn't CARE FOR publicity.

    9. He doesn't like to be publicity.**********GET RID OF THIS ONE

    10. He doesn't like to get publicity.*****This one is not bad, but.......maybe......

    10. He doesn't enjoy being publicized.

    Too many prefers or likes will ruin these sentences. Try a thesaurus when you're stuck sometimes ; )

  • 1. She goes up to this man while looking straight into his eyes.

    2.nice

    3.I love to sit down at the end of a day and read a good book.

    4.People prefer to use recycled paper products.

    5.People often choose to use recycled paper products.

    6.nice

    7.nice

    8.fine

    9.He does not like the publicity.

    10. He stays out of the limelight because he does not like publicity.

  • 1, 3, and 9 are wrong and do not make sense.

  • new to english are you?

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