Is this a poem? "Lunar Rhapsody" c/c?
She softly walks on late-September hills,
Casts glances into sylvan dells
And over star-struck lovers spills
Her midnight bliss with which each heartstring chimes
Like mid-May mornings' wedding bells
That with conjoined souls beats in time,
Before ascending, without flaw or fault
To there pierce heaven's vault
And cast her sweet supernal spells
On one small planet she was made to bless . . .
And share in solitude and loneliness.
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If by Lunar you mean the Heavenly realm, then yes,
logistical dream no more for me, as I feel I am the
only one with serenity and peace in this union with
ascending (after its descent )spirit, even an angel.
No one will ever know and when she comes back
even I do not know, but I share in the solitude, for
my loneliness is bliss.
Love the imagery you created, especially setting the
scene in the first two lines....sylvan dells > vg combo.
I am into syllable counts and developing a better meter
and noticed mostly 8 and 10 count and did not know if
you had an intentional pattern to that or not, but the poem
still flowed like the seraphim on a sliding cloud.
Congrats
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Beautiful. Classic. Tender. Technically superb.
Your Lunar Rhapsody is a beautiful poem. A good Sunday afternoon read.
I like the word supernal.
This is a beautiful poem. You have something there. I write poetry, and I feel inferior now lol
the way you put words together amazes me. Thanks for brightening my day 