hi people..can you correct my English mistakes please? 1O POINTS?

In another case, specifically in the “Lombard Effect” communication is disturbed. Lombard effect is when groups of people talk simultaneously in the same room are forced to raise the tone of voice and the rumors of the voices disturb the speakers. This phenomena is present also in some fishes, in the Cyprinella Venusta, in fact scientist as Holt and Johnston declare “even fishes scream”.

Then there is a communication of human vs human, in a context like an hospital. Good communication between doctors is important. In this case, no verbal communication seems to be more useful than verbal communication , because using when medical records the data is more clear; with the use of verbal language there a risk of misunderstanding.

Communication is not only spontaneous; it can be influenced by a state of mind. If we have a bad state of mind, we are evasive; we can make wrong decision because of our negative feelings. On the contrary, if we have a good state of mind we are more lucid , and it is more likely to make right decisions.

Through communication it is possible to identify the profile of an individual. Organizations such as Scotland Yard or the FBI can identify a terrorist profile. How can an individual reveal himself a terrorist without being aware of doing so? According to the FBI, there are behaviors apparently normal that signal terroristic behaviors.

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  • In another case, specifically in the “Lombard Effect” communication is disturbed. Lombard effect is when groups of people talk simultaneously in the same room and are forced to raise the tone of their voices and the rumors(try to use another word instead of rumor) of the voices disturb the speakers. This phenomena is also present in some fishes, in the Cyprinella Venusta, in fact scientist as Holt and Johnston declared “even fishes scream”.

    Then there is a communication of human vs human, in a context like hospitals. Good communication between doctors is important. In this case, no other types of communication seems to be more useful than verbal communication , because when using medical records the data is more clearer if communications are done verbally and there would be a lower risk of misunderstanding.

    Communication is not only spontaneous; it can be influenced by a state of mind. If we have a bad state of mind, we are evasive; we can make wrong decision because of our negative feelings. On the contrary, if we have a good state of mind we are more lucid , and it is more likely to make right decisions.

    Through communication it's possible to identify the profile of an individual. Organizations such as Scotland Yard or the FBI can identify a terrorist profile. How can an individual reveal himself as a terrorist without being aware of doing so? According to the FBI, there are behaviors that people with terroristic behavior exhibit.

  • It's like the blind leading the blind.

    Sorry, kid, but you're on your own.

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