please correct my grammar >>>?
OBJECTIVE
To decorate a well crafted pot with a paint in colors of red, yellow, green, or blue - a primary color that will enable the viewer's curiosity, fascination, and critical thinking.
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By this I mean I would choose only one color between those mentioned. I'm a little bit worried with my punctuation - the use of comma and hyphen particularly. I'm also worried if I used "or" just fine.
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OBJECTIVE
To decorate a well crafted pot by painting in a color of your choice, i.e., red, yellow, green, or blue – a primary color that should be raising the viewers' curiosity and fascination and making them think critically.
I would phrase it like so-
To decorate a well crafted pot with red, yellow, green or blue paint, use a primary color that will enable the viewer's curiosity, fascination and critical thinking.