Does this make sense? Is this Proper grammer?

Does this make sense? Is this Proper grammer?

as the story continued, slow pieces of luminous information were revealed

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  • It's actually spelled grammar, with an ar ending. Try this, "As the story continued, small pieces of luminous information were revealed," I changed slow to small because if you wanted to say slow it would be, "As the story continued, pieces of luminous information were slowly revealed,"

  • It doesn't quite make sense, because you talk about slow pieces of luminous information.

    Luminous refers to light, and there's no such thing as 'slow pieces' I don't know if you want to call the information luminous or not - you probably mean illuminating, which means information that casts a light on something, or clarifies it. It's slightly illuminating has a slightly different meaning then luminous.

    You would probably make better sense saying it this way:

    As the story continued, pieces of illuminating information were slowly revealed.

  • It would be "as the story continued, pieces of luminous information were slowly revealed"

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