How Do I correct this paragraph? (fORMAL)?

zaharzahar
in Education & Reference

I do appologize for the misunderstanding. It was my computer. I printed the files, and it is very informative and helpful. I'll study the whole thing as fast as I can. Do you think I 'll be able to find a job in Malasiya after I graduate?

Update:

@ mo : English is not my first, even my second language! lol

Comments

  • bookbinderbookbinder

    I do apologise for the misunderstanding, but my computer was at fault. I have printed the file, which is very informative and quite helpful. I shall study the whole file as soon as I can. Do you think that I shall be able to secure a post in Malaysia after I graduate?

  • ken-ross_60b2088b5f885ken-ross_60b2088b5f885

    I apologise for the misunderstanding. It was caused by my computer. I have now printed the files and find them very helpful and informative. I will study them right away.

    Last sentence is fine.

    Good luck with the job

    Mo

    Eng tutor

    Sorry if you are from the US - apologize - I am English.

  • b-kb-k

    "the files" is plural, so you need to say, "and they are very informative . . ."

    that's the only problem I can see.

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