Is my grammar correct?
After everything that happened and seeing my mom cried/cry over the pain, I promised myself that I would never fall for anyone.
it's for my story, so thanks!
Update:Can you explain it to me clearly? Why would I use cry if the sentence is in the past tense? I'm really confused.
English isn't my native language so..
thanks
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..had happened...because the time sequence is different than when my mom cried. By adding had you're showing that something came before the mother started to cry, thus you're showing cause and effect.
Try this.
"After everything that happened, and as I watched as my mom cried over the pain...."
Tracey Mae, it can work as Bailey has re-written it;however, to answer your original question: To keep it exactly as you originally have it phrased, you should pick "cry" not "cried".
it is correct or nt its not a big thing, only thing is dat i able to understand ur feelings in it n it is ok 4 me