Read/Criticise my Poem?

Beautiful Nightmares

by ~NRG-LaDiDie

Lost in nightmares,

Beautiful nightmares.

Black and white and turning blue.

Endless dark and ghosts to pass.

No fright,

No fear,

It's drawing near.

Waiting, lonely.

It ensnares.

I've not been told what this future bears.

I would also like to hear your thoughts and interpretations on the poem :)

Comments

  • Not bad. First thing that comes to mind is death by asphyxiation (black and white and turning blue). Second thought is death in general (no fright, no fear), because a lot of people seem to think there's an overwhelming calm right before someone passes (although having had several NDEs myself, I tend to disagree-death is quite possibly the scariest thing I've ever faced).

    Altogether, I think it's quite good.

  • I loved it, I'll tell you something, it's 100 times better than I could do. It makes me think of a horrible and drastic nightmare. And it was just great, it really was.

  • Lost meaning in your life, or your searching for a meaning...

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