R&P: I Wrote A Poem =)?
When You Pass my Bloodshot Eyes Set Upon You
My Lips Get Life Sucked From Them
But the Devil Will Bargain With Me Too
And You Will Guide Me Away From Him...
I Would be in the gutter if You Wouldn't Have Saved Me
Drugs Running Through My Jagged Veins
You Picked Me Up So Graciously
Absence of Light Was My Dark Brain...
When I Was On the Edge of Insanity
You Held Me Tight When You Saw My Pain
My Heart So Void and Empty
I Saw Our Love As Just a Unsuitable Game...
You Convinced Me to Drop the Needle
When it Almost Devoured My Heart
I Took What Was Left From This Infidel
And Now Our Love Can Finally Start...
I Don't Know Why All My Writing is So Dark haha...
Update:O Ya I Wrote This On Another Account if You Already Saw This haha...
Update 3:Haha Niandra Stay Fl y y y y y yyy! 
My Other Poem is About Addiction to Technology What is Up
Comments
Interesting Poem -- I Read It And Thought, "Yes, This Is An Interesting Poem." This Is What I Thought. I Hope You Have Appreciated My Thoughts And I Have Not oFfEnDeD You In Any Way, Shape, Or Form!
Well thats um....creepy
Dont get me wrong I
creepy its just like the music I listen to and better then anything I've ever done but keep it up cuz there is only a few peeps in this world with a mind that can think up sumthin like that XD
Totally awesum dude
It's nice to see a child writing poetry. You should expand your writing to include some political stuff. Sing about defending what we have left of the environment or a dwindling economy as we move towards socialism.
Rawrr!
I really like it! Good story you got going in there, you're a pretty good writer
That's some dark stuff.
But I like it and you should keep writing them.
not nearly as good as fingertoes' poems, but i guess i shouldnt expect that
"come on and get hi i i ighhhhh"
nice poem, yeah.
*nooooOOO
from here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v5b5vlVi-aI