A "born again" poem for Dallas--c/c?

here at the very

edge where nothing

needs to be said:

everything absorbed

through weather and sea,

the moon

swam back, its rays

all silvered,

time

and again darkness

broken by a crashing

wave,

every day on the balcony

of the sea: wings open,

fire is born,

world rises blue again

like morning

Comments

  • this is a lovely poem by Pablo Nerada

    if you dedicate this to Dallas, that is so sweet of you.

    You really have to give credit to the writer when you post here.

    ...k

    Here I came to the very edge

    where nothing at all needs saying,

    everything is absorbed through weather and the sea,

    and the moon swam back,

    its rays all silvered,

    and time and again the darkness would be broken

    by the crash of a wave,

    and every day on the balcony of the sea,

    wings open, fire is born,

    and everything is blue again like morning. ”

    ― Pablo Neruda

  • Ouch! The plot moistens.

    Who just wrote about a view better than television?

    Oh I remember.

    "...well I just had to laugh...oh boy." John Lennon

  • oMG, YOWEE! I love it, It is so much of what I feel. Thank you so much.

    Waves within view, tower and roll, as currents beneath roil

    on the way to the shore, to deliver a kiss.

    I am happy to see you here again.

  • makes me sick,

    why would you step down to this level

    why does anyone lie, steal or cheat

    simply sad

    I was hoping one day to read something that was really and truly authentic from you.

  • You're a disgusting fake.

  • I'd say he's in love with Dallas...

  • wow, <3

  • You are going to make her day. Made mine too. I am glad to see you!

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